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When did all this good
Happen to break down?
At the end I stood
Thrashed your perfect crown
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Can't bear to look up
At the destruction of the
Neverland we made
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It was beautiful.. once
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So this is how it
All ends in this life of our
Year of happiness
?!
When did all this good
Happen to break down?
At the end I stood
Thrashed your perfect crown
˅
Can't bear to look up
At the destruction of the
Neverland we made
˅
It was beautiful.. once
˅
So this is how it
All ends in this life of our
Year of happiness
?!
My first work in a long time. I was supposed to be doing an English assignment about Sylvia Plath's poetry but instead I decided to make this.
It's mixed in style as you can see. The second and last verses are attempts at haiku-styled poetry. The third verse is just a single line standing alone. The first verse is a traditional style of poetry in my country much used but it's a poor example of it, it translates to quatrain in English from Icelandic. It has the rhymes and syllable quantity in place but is missing a crucial part concerning first letters in words in the lines. I'll explain it better for the ones that want me to.
There's a hidden line in the poem that relates to the rest of it. Now try to find it if you haven't already.
It's mixed in style as you can see. The second and last verses are attempts at haiku-styled poetry. The third verse is just a single line standing alone. The first verse is a traditional style of poetry in my country much used but it's a poor example of it, it translates to quatrain in English from Icelandic. It has the rhymes and syllable quantity in place but is missing a crucial part concerning first letters in words in the lines. I'll explain it better for the ones that want me to.
There's a hidden line in the poem that relates to the rest of it. Now try to find it if you haven't already.
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